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your deepest darkest secret!
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| Your deepest darkest secret
You'll take it to your grave. That one thing that no body knows.
Neither your friend, lover, or soulmate
you have shared that with.
Deep dark secrets.
Of childhood transgressions.
Or perhaps sexual escapades.
Petty crimes.
Venial or mortal sins.
Or something trivial.
Yet it is buried deep.
Deep deep down.
Sometimes so deep within.
That you keep it from yourself.
Till one day you spill the beans
and come out clean
first to yourself
then to your loved one.
Very often before death.
Or in front of God.
But for every one secret revealed.
Thousands are buried forever.
Keep your deep dark secret.
It's the only space that's really your own. | |
| angel a said... | 10:35 PM | 22/Mar/07 | |  | | But God is watching you, god is watching you from a distance....Beautiful prose converted in poetry so well... and so very true.. Warm regards, Angela | |
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warm sunshine said... | 8:42 AM | 14/Mar/07 | |  | | very well written!:) | |
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kanksha p said... | 4:49 PM | 13/Mar/07 | |  | | Yes!! Those are really the spaces of our own...! No tresspassing! | |
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rama v said... | 2:41 PM | 13/Mar/07 | |  | | nice one | |
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Mridu Gupta said... | 12:39 PM | 13/Mar/07 | |  | | there are so many things in life we don''t want to face up to and we bury them deep, but you''re right-at some point of time they blow up in our faces. best to bury them and forget we buried them or own up to them and face the concequences!!! thought provoking post. | |
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Saakshee I said... | 7:39 PM | 12/Mar/07 | |  | | Watz your secret I wanna know? ;) | |
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madhavi sreenivasan said... | 3:47 PM | 12/Mar/07 | |  | | loved the way u expressed it..... :-) | |
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madhavi sreenivasan said... | 3:46 PM | 12/Mar/07 | |  | | so true.... we can try to hide it from ourselves also.... but God always knows it.....He is there always listening to our silence, knowing we need him at every step.... and thats why he takes care of us so that there need not be further such deep dark secrets in our lives....we can share it with him and cry in front of him.... | |
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jade stone said... | 12:57 PM | 12/Mar/07 | |  | | ah sorry! to the grave we carry our secrets - but, there is always some-ONE who knows... Someone''s watching u!! | |
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jade stone said... | 12:56 PM | 12/Mar/07 | |  | | whoa! henious!!! :D what - 38 comments and u wont share them??? | |
| KABERI DUTTA said... | 8:06 PM | 9/Mar/07 | |  | | excellent photo | |
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KABERI DUTTA said... | 8:04 PM | 9/Mar/07 | |  | | love it . | |
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Leela Sami said... | 5:35 PM | 9/Mar/07 | |  | | have you heard the billy joel song ''the stranger''?:did you ever let your lover see the stranger in yourself...... | |
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Suhani Sharma said... | 1:03 PM | 9/Mar/07 | |  | | loved it! | |
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bhawna deshwal said... | 2:57 PM | 8/Mar/07 | |  | | wow gud job caje | |
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A J said... | 11:04 AM | 8/Mar/07 | |  | | Sahee bola bawa!! | |
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gunasagar kumar said... | 10:05 PM | 7/Mar/07 | |  | | This is very nice.Keep it up. | |
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parimala sampath said... | 7:14 PM | 7/Mar/07 | |  | | very nice caje | |
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mysterious lady said... | 1:52 PM | 7/Mar/07 | |  | | VERY NICE............. | |
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Agusta Alphonso said... | 1:50 PM | 7/Mar/07 | |  | | Caje, I feel that there are many secrets that we have which are buried deep deep down and which we ourselves are unaware of. Perhaps if we were always conscious of our secrets then we wouldn''t be able to have sound mental, physical or emotional health, it would constantly follow us like a shadow which we cannot face. |
| restless soul said... | 8:50 PM | 6/Mar/07 | |  | | Yes man, the need for ur own personal space is always there! | |
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nicci carmen said... | 7:09 PM | 6/Mar/07 | |  | | wow!! it is wonderfully written. best wishes... | |
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urvi s said... | 7:00 PM | 6/Mar/07 | |  | | u have crafted this well...but ah the feeling of revealing deepest darkest secret to a close one or may be to a stranger....its another high :) | |
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Malini Laskar said... | 2:40 PM | 6/Mar/07 | |  | | Very true. | |
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madhumati chitale said... | 2:28 PM | 6/Mar/07 | |  | | The long darkSecret of the soul how we hide it , ashamed even to let a stranger catch a glimpse of it , little knowing that the universe has no secrets once we release our bodies , we are all one spirit ,one soul, one light under the OMNI . Having multiple human expriences in solitude | |
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shivani narula said... | 12:29 PM | 6/Mar/07 | |  | | everyone has there own share of it............truly said..............Keep your deep dark secret ....It''s the only space that''s really your own............. | |
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shab seth said... | 11:42 AM | 6/Mar/07 | |  | | i loved them. it''s true fact of life...... | |
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shab seth said... | 12:01 PM | 6/Mar/07 | | |
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