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tickle:-)
Tickle
How I love to tickle you. Here, there, and everywhere.
And it tickles me
to see you tickled.
Remember the last time you were tickled?
Think.
Ah! Now you're smiling...
And it tickles me to see you smile.
What shall I tickle you with?
My toes.
Fingers.
Nose.
Or tongue.
I'd love to tickle you with all those.
But I choose to tickle you with
words and ideas
that make you sigh, hold your breath, pause.
Now you're smiling within.
simran kumar said... | 1:02 PM | 9/Mar/07 | |  | | reading it again cage....n its still tickling................n me smiling!! | |
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Agusta Alphonso said... | 1:37 PM | 7/Mar/07 | |  | | Now I have to say this:"Your imagination runs wild, very wild " | |
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Niharika Bose said... | 4:29 PM | 5/Mar/07 | |  | | wow...........!!! | |
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Amiya Lahiri said... | 10:50 AM | 4/Mar/07 | |  | | It''s nice to be tickled.... | |
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KABERI DUTTA said... | 4:53 PM | 3/Mar/07 | |  | | yes i am smiling within . | |
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aparna m said... | 4:19 PM | 3/Mar/07 | |  | | oh god! u did it again...very wise with words...beautiful.. know wat now i,ve started signing in just to chk ur posts..!!!the charm isgetting better... | |
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jaspreet nagi said... | 12:20 PM | 3/Mar/07 | |  | | it realy make me smilegood one i like that | |
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shivani narula said... | 10:37 AM | 3/Mar/07 | |  | | tickles make me giggle................... | |
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Chitra Venkatessalu said... | 10:29 AM | 3/Mar/07 | |  | | :)pleasing....b''ful | |
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alpana said... | 9:24 AM | 3/Mar/07 | |  | | words and ideas tickle the best and for the longest while...they also become rare memories... |
| Amit Agrawal said... | 8:01 AM | 3/Mar/07 | |  | | :) | |
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shweta said... | 8:10 PM | 2/Mar/07 |  | | I''m smiling:)... thinking of times wen i''ve been tickled, with words and otherwise... | |
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nobody cares said... | 4:51 PM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | nice one :) | |
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sahil banga said... | 4:17 PM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | gud one, short n crisp... | |
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vanna ici said... | 4:13 PM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | Short-n-sweet, iam smiling at ur tickling words! | |
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aradhana khanna said... | 3:28 PM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | this is what i love....a simple sweet poetry that even a child can relate to....childlike poem revealing a new childlike u......hated the previous poem very pompous.....but this one is just so sweet.......daughter must be lucky to have a pa like u......to tickle her with ur words...... | |
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savita chaudhry said... | 1:56 PM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | Very Ticklish Poem..........ending says its all so beautifully. i ve even send it to my bf. | |
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shab seth said... | 1:26 PM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | good poetry, the last words have more feelings n smiling too | |
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jyothi francis said... | 1:16 PM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | ## IT''S A SO NICE POETRY. IT''S REALLY MAKE TICKLING TO OTHERS ## | |
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meeta mehta said... | 12:32 PM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | the feeling to "tickle" n "to be tickled" both couldnt have been epressed better. but yes last words were oozing out more feelings the above ones. | | |
| meena sundar said... | 12:24 PM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | :) | |
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simran kumar said... | 11:01 AM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | that was sweet cage......felt myself tickled while reading....n me smilin tooo........... | |
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rachita chauhan said... | 10:56 AM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | Fantastic Poem, love , rachita. "I am tickeled too" | |
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ALPS T said... | 10:16 AM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | u r too gud with words as usual ! Yes i am tickled ! | |
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shahana qutab said... | 10:11 AM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | really....im not jus smiling bt laughing.......... | |
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meena kumari said... | 9:52 AM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | good to be tickled by words & ideas, keep tickling.............. | |
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Usha Shetty said... | 9:39 AM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | That was NICE....... | |
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Rajakumari Manikkavasagam said... | 9:36 AM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | Nice to read and cherish the momentum of being tickled | |
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richa bhagwat said... | 8:57 AM | 2/Mar/07 | |  | | never thought tickling could be so romantic and interesting.Thanks for sharing the various ways of tickling;)...................ME | |
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Gulden C said... | 4:19 AM | 2/Mar/07 | |
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